"Nothing is a matter of life and death except life and death."
(Angela Carter (1940-1992), British postmodern novelist. repr. Penguin. Wise Children, ch. 4, Chatto & Windus (1991)
Just wanted to give you some feedback: this trailer doesn't get me interested in the book at all. For one, the quotes are hard to read because of the size. Also, the quotes are hard to read because of the language. In addition to that, they don't draw me in--they don't make me wonder what your story's about. Actually, they sort of do--I have no idea what kind of a book this is going to be based on this trailer. Maybe a historical fiction, but the background looks more modern....I'm confused :/ Or, I would be if I hadn't already read what your story's about.
You have such a wonderful, succinct synopsis that makes me really, really interested in the book, but this trailer does almost the exact opposite. If your trailer just had your synopsis, it would be better--more intriguing. I know that you've already published and everything, but if you were interested in launching a new trailer to create new buzz, I would very highly suggest it.
Good luck in all of your endeavors, and I hope your book does well!
Just wanted to give you some feedback: this trailer doesn't get me interested in the book at all. For one, the quotes are hard to read because of the size. Also, the quotes are hard to read because of the language. In addition to that, they don't draw me in--they don't make me wonder what your story's about. Actually, they sort of do--I have no idea what kind of a book this is going to be based on this trailer. Maybe a historical fiction, but the background looks more modern....I'm confused :/ Or, I would be if I hadn't already read what your story's about.
ReplyDeleteYou have such a wonderful, succinct synopsis that makes me really, really interested in the book, but this trailer does almost the exact opposite. If your trailer just had your synopsis, it would be better--more intriguing. I know that you've already published and everything, but if you were interested in launching a new trailer to create new buzz, I would very highly suggest it.
Good luck in all of your endeavors, and I hope your book does well!
Tiffany,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for visiting and taking time to share your feedback.
I have thought about a new trailer to create new buzz and when the time comes, I will come back to this post and consider your suggestion.
I also want to thank you for your good wishes!